Week 5 narrative

There are quite a few strong points in my narrative. I believe that the best part of my narrative is the personal significance. There are many points in my response where the vivid detail goes well with the significance. I am excited about this, because I do not usually get that good of grades on essays. I think that the response I have is in the right direction. I need to work more on transitions and organization. Which always seems to be the case for me.

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