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Tristen- Dialogue Cade- dialouge

       Michael started off with "Hello." Laughing as he said it.   I responded coldly "You dare laugh?" Everyone got quiet. Something big was about to happen, something bigger then ever before. Michael did not look happy, anymore, not at all. He yelled "FIGHT ME, NOW!" His friends began to look uneasy. "I am here for what I deserve." He knew that I wanted it. I had been trying to get it back for 3 months. I cracked my knuckles very loudly. He responded "I don't want no blood spilled tonight." Everyone knew it wasn't true. My gang backed me up by beginning to growl, like dogs. Then I heard sirens. Everyone began to run. Someone had given us up. I yelled before we were gone "This ain't over."

There are quite a few strong points in my narrative. I believe that the best part of my narrative is the personal significance. There are many points in my response where the vivid detail goes well with the significance. I am excited about this, because I do not usually get that good of grades on essays. I think that the response I have is in the right direction. I need to work more on transitions and organization. Which always seems to be the case for me.

Anna Katherine- Dear 12 year olds Thomas G.- Reading response #4

Scarlet's father turned up at her house wearing a transmitter to the people who captured him. Wolf destroys it and provides the name of the gang. "The Order of the Pack" is the name of the gang. Wolf informs Scarlet that he was once a part of the gang. She get really mad and pulls the gun on him again. Wolf being Wolf tells her all he knows without any resistance. They end up on a train to Paris where the gang is located. The plague breaks out and the train turns into a quarantine. They escape from the train before coming to a stop. Cinder is on a ship with a "captain" of the American republic. Thorne the "captain" is not a very bright person. He does not like to think ahead of the current situation. He uses lots of water on a shower(they have limited water). Cinder is therefore to work and think much harder than if she had a partner with half a brain. Queen Leveena demands Cinder back within 3 days. If she dosen't have her by then, then she will

I know that you really nervous about going to a new school. I know you are worried about the obvious stuff, like friends. Do not be worried. All those things will work itself out. The kids at Episcopal are really nice. There are other things that require more attention. Make sure that you get good grades. It can come back to bite you in your butt. There are more important things to focus that you don't even know that exist yet. Cross Country will provide friends and good life experiences. In the summer in between Cross Country seasons practice. Run much more. Just because you are good at it to start; it does not mean that things will stay that way. You must constantly work to get better.                                                                                                              Sincerely,                                                                                                              a 13 year old                                                  

Martha-  Every Day by David Levithan Evan Meek- Todd and Manchee all alone

The book that I am currently reading is called Scarlet. The book is the 2nd in a series behind Cinder. Scarlet is a book from multiple points of views. Thus making it hard to write a plot summary. The setting is in the future; all kinds of new technologies exist. There are people that live on the moon, called lunars! The relationship between earth and the lunars is tense. Scarlet is a girl whose Grandmother just went missing. She is struggling to get people to help find her grandmother. On her journey she meets a man named Wolf. Wolf is a street fighter and is the only person trying to help Scarlet. Scarlet's story is set in France. In common wealth Cinder needs to make an attempt to get out of prison. Since she got locked up to be sent to the moon, to be killed. Since she is a cyborg she has a bunch of special gadgets that can help her to escape.